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[spally]

love is a gift and love is a curse
love who you love and listen to your heart
don't follow the path of anothers brocken heart
show your love weather wronge of right in the eyes of bystanders
time is short so live it well with the one you love

[Dailen]

Hello...
I'm just a novice, so, I'll not critique your work.
After the feelings you've put out,
I felt the need to acknowledge,
How they touched me.

Lovely, ---- food for the heart and mind.

If you speak from experience....My heart goes out to you.

[yellowfeverlime]

Nice poem, but shorten the fourth line so that you can make it FLOW! I like it, and i thuink a title should be... So little time...

[spally]

thanks is it ok if i use that title?