Anon22
09-22-2005, 07:33 PM
Hehe... ok... new here... my first post. ^_^ first off... I'm not much of a writer... I do like writing I just never tend to write that much... I just recently entered High School... so yeah :cool: I'm pretty young... lol. I haven't made that many stories, and maybe as you may have noticed(as a habit) I tend to use "..." a lot. Sorry about that ^_^' it's just a habit I have. Anyhow... as of now I have only written 1 story, The Murder. I think I'll use these quotes to seperate this text from the story, allowing me to use italics in the story. Hope you find it interesting and any advice on it will be appreciated. I now present you, The Murder(which is going to have to be 2 posts long, hope is allowed to double post like this ^_^' sorry if it isn't):
RING! The alarm clock rang, and I woke up. I immediately ran to the calender and checked the date and then I cheered as I put my fist up in the air in excitement. I went downstairs and ran to my mother, "MOM! It's my birthdary! It's my birthday! I'm six-years old now!" I yelled with happiness, "well good morning birthday girl", Mom responded. "I can't wait until I open my presents, and eat the cake! YUM!!" I once again yelled with happiness, "Well first eat your breakfast, listen I'm going to go buy you a cake, I won't be long. If your father wakes up tell him there's food in the fridge". Afterwards she left off with her black coat.
I was home alone with Dad-Dad- he sometimes hits me and is mean, I have a few scars to prove it, luckly he didn't wake up this time. Although when I went up to his room he was pale, but his veins were black, I was starting to get worried, even though he was a bad father. Then I heard my mom come in, she looked different. She came in with the cake, and a worried expression on her face. I was wondering what was going on but I didn't say anything.
It was nearly noon and my father still didn't wake up. My mom went upstairs and tried to wake him up, then she went downstairs, dialed a number, and after a while the ambulence came, asked a lot of questions that took hours to answer, covered his face with a blanket, and carried him away. That's when I thought I saw a person at the window, but I guess it was just my imagination. My birthday was becoming a disaster, my mother was with me at home and we blew out the candles, she explained to me about my father and how he isn't going to be here anymore. I was going to the bathroom at about 6 o'clock at night but then decided to look inside my parents' room, that's when I found the injection needle on the floor... I still had memories of them of when I went to the hospital... I kicked it out the window just the same way I kicked a soccerball, didn't like them.
I felt like going outside for a while, and wondered why dad will never return... I was somewhat happy though. Then I looked at the ground and picked up a picture, it was a picture of a woman, a woman I didn't know. When my mom came running outside, I came to greet her, "Hey mom!" then she gasped, a gun fired and blood all of the sudden dripped over her dark, black clothes. I looked to see who had fired the shot, and that's when I saw the guy, the guy that just simply ran... ran away. After he ran away, I turned to my mom, lying there, bleeding endlessly, blood dripping everywhere over her beautiful clothes, and heard her last words, "Emi... 'member... 'ow I s-aid your f-f-ather wasn't go-ing to be 'ere n-e more?", her breathing was shallow, "Mom?" tears dripped down my eyes
"Mom?"
"Listen, m-ai child, I will-I will al ways be 'ere wit yu"
Her breathing became shallower, tears rolled down her eyes
"Mom?", I cried, "what's wrong? did I do something wrong? Mom? Mom? Mom?!" I bawled and just hugged her
"Oh no dear, yu did no-not-ing wrong... yu did noting wr-wr-wrong"
"I'll-I'll al-ways-"
"Mom?"
"lo-lo-lov yu"
she gasped
"mom?! mom?!"
I had been holding her hand, and all of the sudden it became heavy... and cold...
"Mom?!"
like someone just froze her immediately... I cried endlessly
"Mom, wake up! wake up!"
"Mom wake up! wake up, Mom, wake up! Mom"
"Mom! whatever I did! I'm sorry! I'm sorry Mom I'm sorry! just wake up Mom! wake up! wake up!"
I cried endlessly, my hands filled with blood. I was traumatized, and that's when my birthday had become the anniversary of my parents' death.
A day had past, and I was sent to the orphanage. I had nothing to do but read a newspaper, it said many things like, "Angry man fires employee" which was 2 weeks ago and for yesterday it said "Woman dies in front of child" along with "A woman commits suicide, has strange D--" I stopped reading after that, because a person interrupted me, "Here's your food, Ma'am". He then tripped, and accidently dropped the orange juice on the newspaper and when I went to pick it up it broke apart, "I'm sorry Miss, I'll get you another one", he apologized, I looked at the newspaper, then at him, then the newpaper again, as I thought of my Mom and just thought...................."No thanks I don't feel like reading it anymore", I replied. I was a bit angered, nevertheless worser things had already happened. Many years passed and I was 30 years old, it was my birthday.
I was walking across the street and I bumped into a 50-year old person and dropped some papers he was holding. "Sorry" I said as I picked up his papers "It's okay", the man said, "you seemed troubled, what's wrong?". "It's kind of my birthday today", I replied "Let me guess you don't want to get older?", the man said chuckling a bit "No, it's not that it's just that my parent's died on this day", I replied, "Wow! that's terrible... well... if it makes you feel better.... which it probably won't... but 24 years ago was the day that I was fired... never mind... well, how exactly did they die?". "My father died of unknown causes, but I think I had seen something in the room before, to bad I should've said something, but then... my- my mother..." I started breaking up, " was shot". "What a terrible disaster! hmm... maybe I can help.... here's my card" somehow, he talked as if we had already met, "You'll get a second chance, well... sorry but... got to get to work", and he disappeared. "Second Chance?" I wondered.
I read the news paper first... it was an old one about how someone won the lottery and got a company or something. Then I decided to go to the address on the card. Before you know it I was standing in front of a large building, I entered the building and I went to the 12th floor, just as the card instructed. Then I entered the office.
"Ah, Ms.Relevart, I finally get to see you again", the mysterious man said with a smile. "Mr.mit", I said "please call me Enicham, listen we've been working on a project- a time machine- this is what I meant by second chance", he said as he once again smiled. I was thrilled with the news, I-I can save my mom, I thought excitedly. "Please follow me", he said. There was something about him though... I didn't know what it was... maybe his smile... but I didn't care... because I got a chance to save Mom.
He took me to a room, "Here is where it all happens, the time machine", he said, "Now when was it that your parents died?", once again there was something about him "umm... February 10,2005". As soon as I said it he quickly pressed buttons, and pushed levers on the time machine and with a DING it was set. Afterwards he went to a cabinet and got something that looked like medicine, "Here take these", he told me as he gave them to me
"What's this?" I asked.
"We can't have 2 people in the world with the same DNA... also you have to take this otherwise the time machine can kill you"
"Oh"
After a while of preparation I entered the time machine. The machine hummed and all of the sudden I felt that I was disappearing out of this world, it felt as if my body slowly turned invisible, and my mind slowly drifting away. I eventually fell unconscience, and when I regained conscienceness I-I was...in an alley... I couldn't recognize it... but I felt I was close to my house. My eyes... they were so tired. I felt that I was going to fall unconscience again... and as I slowly drifted away in sleep... I heard this woman and this guy... what were they talking about? so... strange... and then I felt something furry... I opened my eyes... and it was a black cat. I no longer felt sleepy at all... I fully opened my eyes... then all of the sudden these images scattered across my brain, almost immediately... I freaked out.
I looked at my hand... I don't know why... I looked at the object in my hand. The sun was up. Then I felt something around my neck... an arm... a black... dark arm. A black dark arm that came out of the wall of the alley, the wall behind me. I couldn't tell what it was... but all of the sudden I felt like I was losing a grip on life... I felt as if I was dying. Then those images flashed through my mind again... those images with me... me and the blank look, the blank pale look, and slowly the sun set down. I opened my eyes quickly... it was all just a dream... I looked at the nearest clock... it was 3:00 PM... afternoon.
RING! The alarm clock rang, and I woke up. I immediately ran to the calender and checked the date and then I cheered as I put my fist up in the air in excitement. I went downstairs and ran to my mother, "MOM! It's my birthdary! It's my birthday! I'm six-years old now!" I yelled with happiness, "well good morning birthday girl", Mom responded. "I can't wait until I open my presents, and eat the cake! YUM!!" I once again yelled with happiness, "Well first eat your breakfast, listen I'm going to go buy you a cake, I won't be long. If your father wakes up tell him there's food in the fridge". Afterwards she left off with her black coat.
I was home alone with Dad-Dad- he sometimes hits me and is mean, I have a few scars to prove it, luckly he didn't wake up this time. Although when I went up to his room he was pale, but his veins were black, I was starting to get worried, even though he was a bad father. Then I heard my mom come in, she looked different. She came in with the cake, and a worried expression on her face. I was wondering what was going on but I didn't say anything.
It was nearly noon and my father still didn't wake up. My mom went upstairs and tried to wake him up, then she went downstairs, dialed a number, and after a while the ambulence came, asked a lot of questions that took hours to answer, covered his face with a blanket, and carried him away. That's when I thought I saw a person at the window, but I guess it was just my imagination. My birthday was becoming a disaster, my mother was with me at home and we blew out the candles, she explained to me about my father and how he isn't going to be here anymore. I was going to the bathroom at about 6 o'clock at night but then decided to look inside my parents' room, that's when I found the injection needle on the floor... I still had memories of them of when I went to the hospital... I kicked it out the window just the same way I kicked a soccerball, didn't like them.
I felt like going outside for a while, and wondered why dad will never return... I was somewhat happy though. Then I looked at the ground and picked up a picture, it was a picture of a woman, a woman I didn't know. When my mom came running outside, I came to greet her, "Hey mom!" then she gasped, a gun fired and blood all of the sudden dripped over her dark, black clothes. I looked to see who had fired the shot, and that's when I saw the guy, the guy that just simply ran... ran away. After he ran away, I turned to my mom, lying there, bleeding endlessly, blood dripping everywhere over her beautiful clothes, and heard her last words, "Emi... 'member... 'ow I s-aid your f-f-ather wasn't go-ing to be 'ere n-e more?", her breathing was shallow, "Mom?" tears dripped down my eyes
"Mom?"
"Listen, m-ai child, I will-I will al ways be 'ere wit yu"
Her breathing became shallower, tears rolled down her eyes
"Mom?", I cried, "what's wrong? did I do something wrong? Mom? Mom? Mom?!" I bawled and just hugged her
"Oh no dear, yu did no-not-ing wrong... yu did noting wr-wr-wrong"
"I'll-I'll al-ways-"
"Mom?"
"lo-lo-lov yu"
she gasped
"mom?! mom?!"
I had been holding her hand, and all of the sudden it became heavy... and cold...
"Mom?!"
like someone just froze her immediately... I cried endlessly
"Mom, wake up! wake up!"
"Mom wake up! wake up, Mom, wake up! Mom"
"Mom! whatever I did! I'm sorry! I'm sorry Mom I'm sorry! just wake up Mom! wake up! wake up!"
I cried endlessly, my hands filled with blood. I was traumatized, and that's when my birthday had become the anniversary of my parents' death.
A day had past, and I was sent to the orphanage. I had nothing to do but read a newspaper, it said many things like, "Angry man fires employee" which was 2 weeks ago and for yesterday it said "Woman dies in front of child" along with "A woman commits suicide, has strange D--" I stopped reading after that, because a person interrupted me, "Here's your food, Ma'am". He then tripped, and accidently dropped the orange juice on the newspaper and when I went to pick it up it broke apart, "I'm sorry Miss, I'll get you another one", he apologized, I looked at the newspaper, then at him, then the newpaper again, as I thought of my Mom and just thought...................."No thanks I don't feel like reading it anymore", I replied. I was a bit angered, nevertheless worser things had already happened. Many years passed and I was 30 years old, it was my birthday.
I was walking across the street and I bumped into a 50-year old person and dropped some papers he was holding. "Sorry" I said as I picked up his papers "It's okay", the man said, "you seemed troubled, what's wrong?". "It's kind of my birthday today", I replied "Let me guess you don't want to get older?", the man said chuckling a bit "No, it's not that it's just that my parent's died on this day", I replied, "Wow! that's terrible... well... if it makes you feel better.... which it probably won't... but 24 years ago was the day that I was fired... never mind... well, how exactly did they die?". "My father died of unknown causes, but I think I had seen something in the room before, to bad I should've said something, but then... my- my mother..." I started breaking up, " was shot". "What a terrible disaster! hmm... maybe I can help.... here's my card" somehow, he talked as if we had already met, "You'll get a second chance, well... sorry but... got to get to work", and he disappeared. "Second Chance?" I wondered.
I read the news paper first... it was an old one about how someone won the lottery and got a company or something. Then I decided to go to the address on the card. Before you know it I was standing in front of a large building, I entered the building and I went to the 12th floor, just as the card instructed. Then I entered the office.
"Ah, Ms.Relevart, I finally get to see you again", the mysterious man said with a smile. "Mr.mit", I said "please call me Enicham, listen we've been working on a project- a time machine- this is what I meant by second chance", he said as he once again smiled. I was thrilled with the news, I-I can save my mom, I thought excitedly. "Please follow me", he said. There was something about him though... I didn't know what it was... maybe his smile... but I didn't care... because I got a chance to save Mom.
He took me to a room, "Here is where it all happens, the time machine", he said, "Now when was it that your parents died?", once again there was something about him "umm... February 10,2005". As soon as I said it he quickly pressed buttons, and pushed levers on the time machine and with a DING it was set. Afterwards he went to a cabinet and got something that looked like medicine, "Here take these", he told me as he gave them to me
"What's this?" I asked.
"We can't have 2 people in the world with the same DNA... also you have to take this otherwise the time machine can kill you"
"Oh"
After a while of preparation I entered the time machine. The machine hummed and all of the sudden I felt that I was disappearing out of this world, it felt as if my body slowly turned invisible, and my mind slowly drifting away. I eventually fell unconscience, and when I regained conscienceness I-I was...in an alley... I couldn't recognize it... but I felt I was close to my house. My eyes... they were so tired. I felt that I was going to fall unconscience again... and as I slowly drifted away in sleep... I heard this woman and this guy... what were they talking about? so... strange... and then I felt something furry... I opened my eyes... and it was a black cat. I no longer felt sleepy at all... I fully opened my eyes... then all of the sudden these images scattered across my brain, almost immediately... I freaked out.
I looked at my hand... I don't know why... I looked at the object in my hand. The sun was up. Then I felt something around my neck... an arm... a black... dark arm. A black dark arm that came out of the wall of the alley, the wall behind me. I couldn't tell what it was... but all of the sudden I felt like I was losing a grip on life... I felt as if I was dying. Then those images flashed through my mind again... those images with me... me and the blank look, the blank pale look, and slowly the sun set down. I opened my eyes quickly... it was all just a dream... I looked at the nearest clock... it was 3:00 PM... afternoon.