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atiguhya padma
09-07-2005, 12:48 PM
Mornings I slowly wake
An elephant in snow
Your upbeat gecko mood
Has you darting through this
Kaleidoscopic house
To liberate windows
Defenestrate the Night.

The sun reaches its height
A film falls on your soul
The passion of morning
Joys of daybreak welcome
Evaporate from you.
I on the other hand
Begin resurrection
Breathe deeply of that scent
Of the returning dusk.
I listen aware, hear
The tuning down of life

The moon cannot tempt me
To lie in spectral shade
And whisper to darkness,
For I am well alive
An earthquake of body.
Dreams of love already,
Flood your imagined light
So separating us
In this darkened sea-calm.

blp
09-09-2005, 10:57 AM
I find the second and third rather ordinary, but I love the first stanza. It's so strange and jumbled and really turns kaleidoscopically on the word kaleidoscopic, almost in the middle, creating a lovely sense of peaceful disorientation on waking.

Don't know how I missed this one up to now.

Nightshade
09-11-2005, 12:08 PM
DOnt know how I missed this cant think of anything more than this :thumbs_up :banana: to say
:D

subterranean
09-14-2005, 08:36 PM
AP's is always my fav :)