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eric_kollam
09-02-2005, 12:57 PM
Like the heaven’s brilliance

It’s like the heaven’s brilliance,

When you show up on the balcony,

There in the calm and serene winter evenings,

It’s like the inner fire, the desire, reflecting in you

It’s like, a wild fire in my heart,

It’s, a cold but warm brilliant wind,

It’s like feeling the light of eternity,

Or, is it the pure love that always glow as a celestial mystery.



You are so near, yet so far

Never are, you far from my heart,

Will you make my dream come true,

When will the boundaries disappear,

When will the horizons come near,

When will you begin to believe exactly,

That my love is from the depth of my heart.



There may be none like you,

Like a diamond, you would rather be you,

Like each exquisite diamond lies in the radiance of the sun,

You are truly, like a diamond, that

Took birth, billion years, ago

And traveled the journey of love to my heart.



Your sight makes my heart, twirl in love,

It seems, I am lost,

And the place to search is in your heart,

Where I am secure,

Like the pearl in the seashell

Buried in your heart,

Like the pearl shell buried in the sea sand.



Like the enchanting light of the moon in a starlit night,

I see, you in my heart,

I see you reflecting, in my inner fire.



Here, I am inspired by the ageless, motif,

Thinking of you, in every breath, I take

Will the boundaries, disappear,

Will the horizons come near.



For my love,

Eric Pereira

Scheherazade
09-02-2005, 01:00 PM
Welcome to the Forum, eric! :)

I will move this thread to the Personal Poetry section, where it will get more viewing.