Another poem by the trio

[Phoenix_Tears]

This is another one we wrote together-

My heart longs for you, though we are so far away....

Someday we'll meet, and i cry out in dismay
I honestly wish that day were today

if not then may it be tommorrow, for this amount of love could never be borrowed

how is it possible i have never seen you, and yet you make me feel like i have known you forever and a day?
Come to me lover, and carry me away
To a place where dreams become real, continue my love to make me feel

feel my brisk arms around you once more....

Feel our limitations break, opening a door

a door to a future of love and more

A door leading down to my soul's core


All I need, without sight saved for... You are still everything i could ask for

I cannot contain the tears staining my cheeks- I will mourn for your nearness until we do meet-

---------P &T----------

[Phoenix_Tears]

what is the difference of a love unseen and a sleeper that has yet had the audacity to dream.
knowing it takes an idiot to do cool things.
whether it be boundless subtitles on a movie screen or it be sexually offensive or appealing themes
I write for you, my someone at night
to talk to for hours, but never know your true sight
though you may not see where my poetry lies...
it is my goal to make this pheonix no longer cry
to wipe its dreary eyes
to kiss her goodnight-

-Before she takes off, into flight-
With a shimmer of scarlet, and a flash of gold, she is nothing more, than a tale of old-

[b]

The problem that I have with this, is that is isn't consequent and consistent enough to read as real poetry, I'm afraid.

It is obviously very nice, social and intriguing - I also have done similar things - but I think you're well adviced to recompose your 'interaction' afterwards, or at least change the lay-out.

(I like the idea though - you just have to make it more 'poetical', if you ask me. It looks kind of a mess.)

[Koa]

The trio? Who is the trio? Did I miss something?

[AbdoRinbo]

Excellent, Bloom. Whenever I have a problem, I'll just call up The Expert.