Revulsion of Acid

[brighttears]

He procedes to walk fast and run slow
through these whispers of agony
He puts sunblock on his window to keep
the invading rays from coming in
Because everyone knows there are
four quadrants in a graph
Such a strong sudden display of
horses feet on racetracks
He walks on and continues in this
contest of undesirable discovery
for a prize
His prize is to be the prize winner holding
the title Revulsion of Acid
To lead and celebrate

[blp]

Mmm. Excellent. Makes me gasp a little as I read it. The end breaks down a bit though, not in an entirely good way. Best bit is the middle.