your rain

[alissa]

this is my first post......so here goes:

inside i'm hurting
paralyzed in pain
while you're deserting whats kept me sane
let me stand in this rain
while you walk away
I'll still be waiting where you left me
forget escaping this misery
the gentle raping of our history
I am fine
this lonliness will resign
I am mine even if you never are
I can live with the scars
of wanting someone
who fell too far away from me

[MoreHomeworkPlz]

I have also written a poem about rain, which after reading your touching poem, I have felt necessary to share (Share means post, this is copywrited, and any attempt to use the work as your own will result in legal action)

Rain

It wets my socks so
In a river it does flow
Worse than lala dipsy and po
How much I hate rain, you'll never know

It makes my hair curl
In a whirlpool, it whirls
Rain is not the same as pearls (no its not)
Oh rain rain go away
Come again
Another day *sigh of contempt*

What do you think? It took me 6 weeks to perfect (please dont be jealous)