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bloggod
07-06-2005, 03:59 PM
to go out as an
august apple tree, splitting
my vows with ripe fruit

*

to experience
hunger, a skeletal lick
over her fingers
SwiftSleigh7
07-09-2005, 09:16 PM
To Go Out As Space
Filled With Starry-spangled Light
Essence Of Delight

To Experience
Lust In All Its Hungry Forms
Probing, Lingering
amuse
07-09-2005, 09:28 PM
to go out as an
august apple tree, splitting
my vows with ripe fruit

*

to experience
hunger, a skeletal lick
over her fingers
i like these! the first one's especially meaty and picturesque.
SwiftSleigh7
07-09-2005, 09:45 PM
i like these! the first one's especially meaty and picturesque.

oxymoronic with an emphasis on "moronic" to call a poem about fruit "meaty"...
but I'll agree that they are both picturesque...

Do I intimidate you much, amuse?
amuse
07-09-2005, 10:03 PM
1. no but i do find you a tad rude. i was aware of what i was typing, btw. ;) i found it to more of a juxtoposition/coziness but whatever. if you didn't like it, i've never looked for fans. not a big deal. :)

2. :confused: are you trying to intimidate? i haven't noticed a great reception for that sort of thing here. like i haven't been, and i'm not sure (m)any others would be, either.
SwiftSleigh7
07-09-2005, 11:05 PM
1. no but i do find you a tad rude. i was aware of what i was typing, btw. ;) i found it to more of a juxtoposition/coziness but whatever. if you didn't like it, i've never looked for fans. not a big deal. :)

2. :confused: are you trying to intimidate? i haven't noticed a great reception for that sort of thing here. like i haven't been, and i'm not sure (m)any others would be, either.


1) Thank you for noticing... rudeness is my open deck... ready for cutting! lol
2) no, I don't try to intimidate... but I always like to see how people respond...
their lack of responsiveness is always telling, as is your responsiveness... thanks.
amuse
07-09-2005, 11:12 PM
np

*s10cr
Basil
07-09-2005, 11:34 PM
I swear, you two are just like Benedick and Beatrice. I bet it's just a matter of time before you fall in love . . .
SwiftSleigh7
07-09-2005, 11:34 PM
np

*s10cr


lol

assuming that is code for "stinker," I accept the appellation! haha
SwiftSleigh7
07-09-2005, 11:36 PM
haha... sure, sure basil... as long as you come between us, there is no fear of that! haha
bloggod
07-29-2005, 02:16 AM
hey you mangey squatters!



go permeate yer own distillation of haiku to flatulate upon :santasmil




please wipe up a bit as you leave. :wave: