haikutoo

[imthefoolonthehill]

totally centered
all you quasi zen masters
make my parts hurt bad

[imthefoolonthehill]

whine, misunderstood
you are not before your time
eat it, snotwipe!

[imthefoolonthehill]

you are no artist
your poems constipate me.
Be discouraged, please.

[Avalive]

I can't really write haiku,but I'd like to follow by some simple lines


An alive piano sings
I have no knowing hands
Quietly bury the notes

A dear soul creates
I have no novel brains
Calmly eat my oldness

[amuse]

I can't really write haiku,but I'd like to follow by some simple lines


An alive piano sings
I have no knowing hands
Quietly bury the notes

you can't write haiku??????? wtf?

[imthefoolonthehill]

Poets die alone
Because everyone hates them
maggots love them, though

[imthefoolonthehill]

You hate your job too?
Waste your life for paper bills
Does this surprise you?

I am not surprised.
Conventional minds are sick.
They aren't worth saving.

[imthefoolonthehill]

Your mind is diseased.
Most everyone's infected
This cancer I lack.

[chmpman]

Impotent ravings
Brought forth by a pained sparrow
Numb subservience

[imthefoolonthehill]

destruction heals me.
the release releases me.
the world is burning.

:- )

[SwiftSleigh7]

sadly talent wastes
as raw bile accumulates
like a pile of ****;

but if repentence
comes in the form of rewrites,
Truth brings a new chance.

[imthefoolonthehill]

invasive nonesense
ignorance shows its disgust.
look and see nothing.

[SwiftSleigh7]

overinflated
egotistical idol
worshipping himself

[imthefoolonthehill]

ignorance unveiled
laughable accusations
bother someone else.

[story7A]

Kate Chopin once wrote
that the artist must possess
the courageous soul.

My soul lacks courage
but my body awakens
with every new wave.

[imthefoolonthehill]

Great Expectations
A desire to be unique
This is normal too.

Can we but conform?
Nonconformity's a joke.
An oxymoron

[SwiftSleigh7]

ignorance unveiled
laughable accusations
bother someone else.

Standing unassailed
I laugh at defensiveness
too bad you're a child

[SwiftSleigh7]

Great Expectations
A desire to be unique
This is normal too.

Can we but conform?
Nonconformity's a joke.
An oxymoron


Fine display of tact
individuality
is normal as sin

redundant essence
of paradigmatic
definition: Duh!

[imthefoolonthehill]

assume direction.
assume my defensiveness.
assume way too much.


sure, insult people.
you can act big on the web.
let's assume some more.

Less than fifty posts,
I am smiling with respect.
well, smiling at least

[SwiftSleigh7]

for some, quality
is better than mere quantity
others go on and on...

a BIG difference:
You assume, while I infer
based on what I see

You don't fool my eyes
reality, transparent
lies upon your lips:

Your banal, rude quips
Betray a lack of talent
mired in malice.

I will now leave you
to your insecurities
since you fail to learn!

[imthefoolonthehill]

more insults, i see
they are not necessary
few things really are.

Time to start over
I've got a message to tell
I am very bored.

Dear World: you're not dear.
Not to me, and not right now.
Show me some kindness.

Please walk hand in hand.
Under all the fireworks
Enjoy this moment.

Nothing is better
than silent companionship.
Quiet devotion

Stand by each other
toss a smile back and forth.
understanding all.

Find purpose in love
Find happiness with someone.
Find it and enjoy.

Be a gentleman
Act with supreme chivalry
be courteous, kind.

Enjoy your short life.
May it be happy and good.
Smile here and now.

Live as I have not.
Please be happy and joyful.
Find love, be happy.

[SwiftSleigh7]

I am impressed by
your willing and generous
sensibility

let's begin again
I really am sensitive
and I aim to please

but contemptuous
lines of poetry raise my
hackles and pull out bile

I am more happy
when we wile away the time
with gentle caring

wit and relative
intelligence; Care to join
me in reparte

that gives poetry
a better name than most crass
souls would consider

giving it. In a
world where few are kind, civil
behavior is rare.

Thank you for turning
the leaf and venturing out
Good things will arise.

:)