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brighttears
06-16-2005, 05:20 PM
The lies.
All the liars who tell the truth; and all the truth speakers telling lies.
The drama, cold dinners, hot rooms, dim lights;
And you claim that you're a winner?
Your head gets thinner;
Heavy thinkers really dimwitted;
Air-heads really heavy thinkers.
All the haters who love;
And all the lovers who love to hate.
Why love the double sided who you claim to hate?
Why hate the people you claim to love?
All the same differences and likings of dislikes.
All your rights are wrong and all their wrongs are right?
Mistakes are lost so start all over again.
Success is your mistake;
Mistakes are their success.
Drama, double sided, and lies.
The life we live is not enough to us;
Who would want to try harder.
Your effort is not enough for their satisfaction.
Your effortless selves pay for their reaction.
All the pick ups are dropped;
All the drops get picked up.
Your truths are lies their lies are true.
Their spoken promises promise to break hearts.
Their bringing ups break you down.
They want your happiness, but their passion is insanity,
your diving is their drowning.
Instead of helping you with you they use the method of contrast and comparing.
All your gracefulness and trust;
Is their disgrace and disgust.

Avalive
06-16-2005, 10:20 PM
Clap hands. Good write.

This can be a very powerful write, but what it dose to me is actually to sadden me. This world is never an opaque. Truth is transparent.

brighttears
06-16-2005, 10:38 PM
thanks for commenting, this was actually my first.