This point in time...

[Molko]

The axis turns on my suffering
At war with my hearts oppression
All alone am I with this feeling
Such is life's bitter transgression...


==Sorry the poem's short, but this summed up how I'm feeling at the moment. Dont know if any of it actually makes sense, lol ==

[amuse]

sounds musical...

[SwtRose]

Great piece of writing Molko. I really like the metaphor you weave here. This poem reflects what many of us feel. Pretty profound for such a short poem.

[mono]

I strongly agree with amuse's idea of its sounding musical.
Do you usually count syllables per line in your poetry, Molko?
Very beautiful, anyway, and its short length of which you comment on, adds a sort of simplicity that I often love in modern poetry, personally.
Well done! :)