Away

[star_gazer2000]

I long to disappear
fade away, diminish
Cut open my veins
to wacth the romance
flow away
Slice open my wrists
to see my love for you
bleed away
The color crimson stains my smile
I'll dive into the sea
farther and farther away
down into the deep of my pain
I thought you knew and
I thought you just might care
but you've taken your dagger and
driven it through my heart
Your lips drip poison on my soul
Let me hand you the knife
for you to slit my throat
I'll take my last breath
to confess my love for you
Bury me in a lover's trove
so my spirit may dwell with youu
Scatter my ashes throughout the sea
so I may finally be free of you
Put your pistol to my head
Close your eyes and pull the trigger
Send me into the darkness
Let me fade away

[SwtRose]

You have typos. :)
to watch the romance
and so my spirit may dwell with you

Nicely crafted, a well written, bittersweet, dark, descriptive poem. My only suggestion would to use some stanzas. They help in my opinion to make the poem not appear so long.