never forget

[star_gazer2000]

The sun shines dark on a dying soul
As winds bring tears to my searching eyes
I wish to find hope in sea of rage
But no one has hurt me as you have
I wait for the day you awaken
but the horizon has faded
and the storm's steadily brewing
so though I've never given up
this is my final stand
never forget I don't regret...

[Koa]

good...i like the end a lot! :)

[Nightshade]

Oh i love the first line!!

[Helga]

the ending is great.

[star_gazer2000]

thanks guys.... it was one of those random things where i didnt even realize i was writing. gotta love those.

[SwtRose]

Removed user.

[Avalive]

#$#$^%%#$##$$ ( a faint smileley face right here, these are my secretive words, plz Ignore)

But I'd say this is a nice write. Keep it up.