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Avalive
05-28-2005, 06:35 AM
Look Higher


Our tears shed for those what we lost in a game
For which our lives are the only thing that can pay
The cost we strive to get in the rage of the unknown
Run to get out the people who can tell us the truth
Till there is a bullet that makes us shout
We throw bricks at the walls of jail
Without a care for our worried lives
With no one left to help the lost kids
From the block with clean hands and hearts
Then they follow the path we made
Till a bullet that makes them shout
So when someone tells you
Parents have no answers but hidden guns
There is no love in the streets
It's the time for you to turn around
Look higher from the blocks and walls
Pray to the gods high above



[ I own only half of the poem ]

Helga
05-30-2005, 06:45 PM
I love the ending, and this is a great subject. .....no love in the streets.... I love that line....very good Avalive!

Avalive
06-01-2005, 11:58 PM
Thank you Helga.

Nightshade
06-02-2005, 04:28 AM
I like it too its sort of heartening (is that even a word)
:nod: yup I like it cant tell you exactly what I like in it esopecially its just........ :thumbs_up :banana:
going to shut up now before I damn it with faint praise ;)