Bartholomeus Bloom

[gatsbysghost]

could you have a look at my poem Population: 1? I would appreciate any suggestions. I was experimenting a little with internal monolouge but I am afraid some of his thoughts didn't share the same voice as the rest of the poem. I have more comments on the matter but I will await yours.

[b]

Alright, gastbysghost

I will certainly have a look at your poem. But I advise you to use the personal messages option, next time you want to ask something pointed to an individual user.

(The topic-name 'Bartholomeus Bloom' scared the hell out of me: am I a poem written by some guy called gastbysghost?)

[gatsbysghost]

too funny