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[lynk]

What is it that hurts so badly?
Why do our feelings lead us astray?
Make us love whp we cannot
Make our desire so strong tears cannot comprehend
if this is love why do we seek it?
Love is unattainable despite what man feels
Infatuation is usually percieved as love
But time reveals the TRUTH
The way i feel is beyound words
No language can decifer these feelings
To be bbe so close yet so far
To feel her warm glow yet shun away from it
The fear of being discovered is unimaginable
A wave of emtion clouds my judgement
Deludes me into feeling i can succeed
My mind knows the truth
i know the truth
She will never be mine
I will never forget you ------a

[Phoenix_Tears]

you know, i believe what you wrote is very true.
i was once in a situation similar. it is not a good memory though.
i think this poem expresses strong feelings, it made me feel sad and i felt pity? was it for you. that is a good thing.
you made your reader feel something.
~Phoen-X~

[lynk]

thanks im gald you like it. it was just my thoughts at a particular time in my life. thanks again for taking the time. by the way i checked out your website.

[Phoenix_Tears]

err.. oh yeah my old website that sucks..lol
just somethign i did at 2 in the morning a while back.lol
~Phoen-X~