The Girl

[Lady_S]

A thousand tears she shed for him
A thousand years she'd wait for him

Ceaseless was this mortal coil
Powerful enough to foil
All the heartbroken tales of despair and woe
That to the world she dare not show
Forever would this infatuation linger
She was wrapped around his little finger
Like a river rock polished to an inane degree
She was trapped and could not be
More than he unjustly desired

And so fell short the mighty fire
That once burned within
And now was looked upon as sin
Slowly she will wilt away
Though praying for that hopeful day

written this morning after staying up all night. enjoy, I suppose ^_^

[Phoenix_Tears]

err..
i don't think i could find anything wrong with it. so i applaud it.*applauds it* you can do well what i can not do at all, write some sort of a love poem. ~L.T.N.G.Phoen-X~

[tear_killer]

hey this is on poetry.com

[Phoenix_Tears]

yeah..
possibly under the name.. err i dunno anastasia simmons???
so is one of my poems. look it up. its under the name tifanie nikole gardner. lol
~Phoeni-x

[alissa]

i absoultely love the first two lines. i mean the entire poem is really good but the beginning is so......perfect. i've felt that way one too many times in my life.
-alissa-

[alissa]

i absoultely love the first two lines. i mean the entire poem is really good but the beginning is so......perfect. i've felt that way one too many times in my life.
-alissa-