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tonywalt
06-03-2026, 12:15 PM
The hand kept moving

long after the fire

learned obedience.

each line arrived on time.

the room stayed clean.

the shape became perfect.

and

the spirit waned.

Danik 2016
06-06-2026, 07:25 PM
I like the economy of this poem, Tony!

tailor STATELY
06-06-2026, 07:32 PM
Enjoyed too :) It's a shame the fire gets tamed and the spirit wanes.

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor