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Jerrybaldy
03-29-2026, 06:48 PM
And the red wine is fine
For now,
I'm not sure anybody
Really loved me back,
But it's fine for now
It will do, it's ok
It's f ucking fine for now
And now is all we've got.

The bottle is corked,
But it's medicinal
So that's ok.
I will feel just fine this morning
And for the rest of the day.
The melancholy and me
Will go away.

And the red wine is fine for now
So fine and mellow
Softening the lines
Forgetting my demise
With nicotine and sex
With a future ex.

The f ucking wine
Is f ucking fine
I'm having a great time .
For now.

Life is fine for now
It's ok
It's getting easier to leave
Every day.
No longer sure I'll even mind
It's fine.

No idea what the point was
It proper had me believing
Now I know it's pointless
I'm really fine just leaving.

tailor STATELY
03-30-2026, 04:12 AM
Melancholy poem, the protagonist mellowing as the corked wine is imbibed. A poem of one waiting for the inevitable. Enjoyed :)

Hoping you are well,

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

tonywalt
03-30-2026, 08:14 AM
And the red wine is fine
For now,
I'm not sure anybody
Really loved me back,
But it's fine for now
It will do, it's ok
It's f ucking fine for now
And now is all we've got.

The bottle is corked,
But it's medicinal
So that's ok.
I will feel just fine this morning
And for the rest of the day.
The melancholy and me
Will go away.

And the red wine is fine for now
So fine and mellow
Softening the lines
Forgetting my demise
With nicotine and sex
With a future ex.

The f ucking wine
Is f ucking fine
I'm having a great time .
For now.

Life is fine for now
It's ok
It's getting easier to leave
Every day.
No longer sure I'll even mind
It's fine.

No idea what the point was
It proper had me believing
Now I know it's pointless
I'm really fine just leaving.

Really enjoyed this one.