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Babyguile
03-16-2026, 04:30 PM
They left me your recipe, mother, more stain than paper,
in a plastic hospice cup. Now your eyes are de-capped chestnuts
in a jar on the draining board.

soaking will take the bitterness away

The colour of bruises. I pinned it on the cork,
must have read it a thousand times,
learned the steps by heart. As if you taught me.

handle them gently, they will soften over time

I inspect each kernel for a small round hole,
big enough for a worm to tear through the mealy flesh.
I drain the jar and think of an ocean.

one part cream to three parts stock

You measured the days before you could leave me.
At three, a child is old enough to remember
the shape of her mother’s face.

store the rest in a cool, dark place

And I could just as easily throw it out. Tear it up.
Shatter everything on the checkered linoleum tiles.
Then there I’d be, picking up the pieces.

simmer but don't let it boil

So instead, I press the damp pulps to my nose,
inhale the strange, earthen odour, while the day begins
to forget its own face. And inside me, the question squirms—

p.s. don’t forget to score the chestnuts

why did you leave and not come back?

if something needs to grow, but it can’t, it will explode

tailor STATELY
03-16-2026, 05:14 PM
Enjoyed so much on many levels. An intimate poem of love and betrayal and loss evoked through a found recipe from the past... very relatable for me. Thank you for sharing dear poet.

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Babyguile
03-16-2026, 06:10 PM
Thank you so much for the kind words. Just reliased this is my first post (almost said 'tweet') in five years. Just glad this place hasn't disappeared.

spikepipsqueak
03-17-2026, 11:23 PM
That was moving, Babyguile. Thank you for sharing it.

tonywalt
03-18-2026, 11:40 AM
This is really strong—quietly devastating in a way that sneaks up on you.

What works immediately is the structure. The interweaving of the recipe instructions with memory is beautifully controlled. Those lines—

Jerrybaldy
03-29-2026, 07:02 PM
Heartfelt and well composed. Seems almost too personal to critique. Well done and sorry for your loss.

Babyguile
03-30-2026, 02:17 AM
Thank you spike and tony. And don't worry Jerry this is not biographical at all. I just had the idea for a poem based on a recipe.