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Nevolia
07-15-2003, 12:51 PM
check this poem out....
:) Memories



Thinking of you, there now forms a pain in my throat, brings back
reflections of you. My head in my hand, the tears stream from my eyes,

I slowly sink to the earth. Darkness descends-- engulfing me into shadows,
And unknown regions of conscious. Sparks of light shred the darkness of my

Tightly sealed eyes, I cry out in pain. My body shakes, frightened, I scream.
My head throbbing, eyes blood shot, and nerves shaken, I plunge into the

Light. My eyes burn from its fiery intensity. Silently I close my eyes and stare
Around the room-- filled with faces of the dead, their lives cut short.

What can I do to ease their suffering? I ask this to the wind, who softly chuckles
And gives no response. “Time shall mend their broken souls“, I’m told, from someone

Whom I don’t remember now. Here I sit alone, seemingly four thousand years from
That dreadful day, and still there are no answers. Memories are all I have to keep

These demons here at bay, who come to me on tainted days to rob me of my soul. What more
Can anyone do? Nothing, I think--No -- Nothing, I believe.
I love the world for what it is

But not for what it has become. Who gives the right to anything to steal away my joy. I
Hate myself for thinking so, but I am afraid of letting go.

So memories are all I have
To keep these demons here at bay.


wutcha guyz think?? respond--por favor :D

Nevolia
07-16-2003, 01:40 PM
Can someone plzzzzzzzz reply to my poem i need some feedback. Plz help..thank you...(Not trying to sound pathetic or ne thing) ;)

alissa
07-18-2003, 12:30 AM
hey i'm new to this entire site but i stumbled across your poem and it moved me. i relate to your words. -alissa-

Nevolia
07-18-2003, 08:00 AM
Hey Alissa, welcome to the site first off. I'm kinda new here too. Thank you for the reply, I appreciate it. :D

Phoenix_Tears
07-18-2003, 10:09 PM
You know.. many times i encourage people about their poetry. i am in earnest then, so let me be truthful now.

I absolutely am next to tears.
This poem made feel things inside. That is important.
!!!!!!!!~
Phoen-X

Nevolia
07-19-2003, 02:25 PM
Wow Phoenix thanx, your response really made me feel great. I am glad it has moved people and i only hope more people can read this poem and reply. Thank you to those who did. This is the first time i've shown anyone my poetry and i want as many responses as possible.. :D
Thank you again........