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MANICHAEAN
09-26-2025, 04:19 AM
She asked if she could talk.

A lovely combination of vulnerability alternating with strength and stubbornness.

She apparently worked in the restaurant downstairs but was friends with the barman who she thought handsome.

He had laughed in response when he heard.

Apparently he was the owner and older than he looked.

She had talked frankly, as one can to a stranger. albeit not Japanese.

Unhappy marriage, little show of emotion in the relationship, no children.

He noted that she drank but not heavy, and smoked also.

Great skin and hid her laughter behind long fingers when embarrassed.

He had shook hands with the barman when he left, but in her case she did not rise and seemed uncertain.

It had been his intention to hug her, but he limited himself to rubbing her back gently.

tailor STATELY
09-26-2025, 07:22 AM
Intimate vignette... part of a greater story ?

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

MANICHAEAN
09-26-2025, 12:39 PM
Thank you for reading Tailor Stately. No, it will remain as a vignette. I base a lot of my writing on instances whilst working overseas for 35 years. And this was an instance in Yokohama drinking at a bar, with just the barman and a Japanese lady present. It surprised me coming along the bar to ask if she could talk. No pick up, just conversation. As a race they are very non emotional and under control, so even more exceptional. I just tried to incorporate the circumstances and the interaction.

Danik 2016
09-26-2025, 04:28 PM
She asked if she could talk.

A lovely combination of vulnerability alternating with strength and stubbornness.

She apparently worked in the restaurant downstairs but was friends with the barman who she thought handsome.

He had laughed in response when he heard.

Apparently he was the owner and older than he looked.

She had talked frankly, as one can to a stranger. albeit not Japanese.

Unhappy marriage, little show of emotion in the relationship, no children.

He noted that she drank but not heavy, and smoked also.

Great skin and hid her laughter behind long fingers when embarrassed.

He had shook hands with the barman when he left, but in her case she did not rise and seemed uncertain.

It had been his intention to hug her, but he limited myself to rubbing her back gently.

Enjoyed the vignette. In the last sentence there seems to be a tipo: "he limited myself..."

MANICHAEAN
09-26-2025, 05:56 PM
Thanks Danik. My mistake.

Danik 2016
09-26-2025, 11:27 PM
Your welcome!