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tonywalt
08-11-2025, 08:42 AM
Grey mouths open for buses,
Breath hanging like brief remarks
The air smells of wet newsprint,
And the shopfront glass holds nothing yet.

Hunched shoulders push the morning on,
Each face its own closed door.
Shoes slap the pavement’s memory
Of last night’s rain.
Even the streetlamps look glad to be off.

Somewhere ahead, past the shuttered bakery,
She’ll be waiting.
I keep my eyes down —
The trick is not to seem different,
Though the fact hums under my coat.

Then I see her,
Standing in the thin light
Like the day’s one good idea,
Scarf loose, hair unbothered by the wind.
She notices me — the corners of her mouth shift.

The crowd presses its errands forward,
Carrying lunch breaks and train times
And whatever will fill the evening.
I let them pass on into their day,
Into the kind of morning they’ll never know.

Danik 2016
08-11-2025, 09:52 AM
Enjoyed the contrast: girl X people going to work on Monday morning!

tonywalt
08-11-2025, 09:57 AM
Enjoyed the contrast: girl X people going to work on Monday morning!

Thanks. Granted i live in the tropics and not london, maybe next poem will be in a sunny place.

Danik 2016
08-11-2025, 10:28 AM
Oh, it's cold and cloudy here today!

tailor STATELY
08-11-2025, 11:15 AM
Enjoyed :)

Warm here... going to be near 100° F (37.8° C) as it has been the previous 2-days and will be a day or two hence.

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

tonywalt
08-11-2025, 11:59 AM
Thanks.

It's warm here
88°F or 31C
Precipitation: 0%
Humidity: 68%
Wind: 11 mph

Danik 2016
08-11-2025, 01:58 PM
About 17C here now inside the house. Agreably cold.