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tonywalt
06-18-2025, 10:43 AM
It starts just as I’m merging —
a scatter of soft taps on the windshield
that quickly agree to become a steady conversation.

The wipers, summoned from their long repose,
begin their familiar metronome,
clearing a narrow stage for my eyes,
then letting the world slip back again
into its wet blur.

Other drivers pass me —
gray shapes with faint halos,
as if each car were some minor saint
on its own private pilgrimage.

I grip the wheel as if steering mattered,
as if this stretch of road
weren’t already written,
the lines dissolving under a wash of water.

And though I know
there’s coffee ahead,
with someone soft
a conversation,
perhaps even sunlight later,
for now I am content
to follow these blinking taillights
through the gray pages of this morning.

tailor STATELY
06-18-2025, 07:00 PM
Wonderful images and language... Enjoyed :)

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

tonywalt
06-18-2025, 08:00 PM
Thanks Tailor