ME

[srihere]

Me
I look in ME,
Making Jurgling noises at Myself,
Viewing the world, through ME,
I find it quite coloured,

Wish the transformation could lend,
Mend the way the ME sees,
The world around the bent parabola.

The Rainbow drops', sweet scented dew.
On the Carpet of ME.
So sweet that it...
Seems ME is lost in a world of Everybody.

ME in Everybody seems a lot different,
A lot colourful.....
Just like a Rainbow....with all the colours,
Rather than just a single colour of the Rainbow.

ME in Everbody is a Lot better than just ME.

[Phoenix_Tears]

I think.. perhaps you are very comfortable with yourself? I dunno.. i slurred the words in my mind. It was good i can tell you that. reminds me of the christina aguilera song "beautiful". Keep up the good work.
-Phoen-x-

[Nevolia]

i think ur poemz awesome..especially the ending...good work :D