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angliholic
07-02-2023, 09:09 AM
The early summer morning's bright,
and the vibe of a mini park's right,
so I gaze amorously
at a pink daisy nearby.
Regrettably,
she turns her goo-goo eyes
towards the nonchalant sunlight
in the distant skies.
Danik 2016
07-02-2023, 09:50 AM
Charming and humorous poem! itīs good to have you posting again, angliholic.
angliholic
07-02-2023, 09:53 AM
Charming and humorous poem! itīs good to have you posting again, angliholic.

Thanks, Danik, for your feedback, but why did you think it's charming? Which part is charming?
Danik 2016
07-02-2023, 09:59 AM
The images and the composition are charming, the flower instead of a woman.
angliholic
07-02-2023, 05:30 PM
The images and the composition are charming, the flower instead of a woman.
Thanks, Danik, for the crystal clear feedback.
tailor STATELY
07-03-2023, 02:33 AM
:) Enjoyed the "vibe" of a subject so tender.

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
angliholic
07-03-2023, 10:13 AM
:) Enjoyed the "vibe" of a subject so tender.

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Thanks, Tailor, for reading and the encouraging comment.