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Jerrybaldy
03-28-2023, 07:06 PM
I will not forget you,
you swam out to sea
Spitting salt, horse dancing
Screaming get me out.
Up and down like a fisherman's float
Crazy in your eyes
Like you were never coming home
To the hug of a warm towel
Thrashing like there were drums
Sea urchins for eyes
Tentacles around your silky thighs
Mouth wide
Drinking it in
I will not forget you
I waved as you caught my eye
I mouthed I L Y
And wiggled my toes in the sand
Only you were in the sea
But from deep below
Blind fish thrashed and fought
To take you down
I took a bite of my ice cream flake
And watched you go.




I never forgot how your hair
Disappeared

tailor STATELY
03-29-2023, 06:12 PM
I will not forget you,
you swam out to sea
Spitting salt, horse dancing
Screaming get me out.
Up and down like a fisherman's float
Crazy in your eyes
Like you were never coming home
To the hug of a warm towel
Thrashing like there were drums
Sea urchins for eyes
Tentacles around your silky thighs
Mouth wide
Drinking it in
I will not forget you
I waved as you caught my eye
I mouthed I L Y
And wiggled my toes in the sand
Only you were in the sea
But from deep below
Blind fish thrashed and fought
To take you down
I took a bite of my ice cream flake
And watched you go.




I never forgot how your hair
Disappeared

Enjoyed this wry poem... this ranks up there with your poem about someone writing notes while walking as a woman "falls" into a river/lake some time back :)

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor