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Delta40
09-09-2022, 10:57 PM
A car slams into my bike
Splintering bone
Shattering glass
I snap clavicles of jokes;
You know, the rib cracking kind
'Oh, I'm so glad you ran into me'
It dulls the pain
The out of body trauma
On a corner
Some crossroad I'm hurtling past
Way too fast.

Danik 2016
09-10-2022, 07:33 AM
Hi, Delta

Itīs been ages!
Hope you are fine
and that the story
of your poem
is invented.

tailor STATELY
09-10-2022, 02:34 PM
Howdy Delta40 ! Wonderful to see you posting !

Echoing Danik 2016's concern.

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

cacian
09-10-2022, 09:18 PM
A car slams into my bike
Splintering bone
Shattering glass
I snap clavicles of jokes;
You know, the rib cracking kind
'Oh, I'm so glad you ran into me'
It dulls the pain
The out of body trauma
On a corner
Some crossroad I'm hurtling past
Way too fast.

so deep and honest
fragile is not the word!
fast healing is a must.

tonywalt
09-11-2022, 10:09 AM
love this poem, as always, hope all is well enough Delta

angliholic
09-11-2022, 08:01 PM
Hi, Delta

Itīs been ages!
Hope you are fine
and that the story
of your poem
is invented.

Like Danik, I feel so glad and cheerful to see you back.

Steven Hunley
09-29-2022, 06:32 PM
Feel the same way. Missed seeing your name and latest entries

Hawkman
11-04-2022, 04:28 AM
Pithy, crisp and brittle. Good one Delta...

Live and be well - H