magic

[cacian]

indifference is
cosy
till it turns
frost
chills are made of
loss
in love one
always thrills
warmth gloss
and relys on nothing
but air
it has room
for magic
not one tear just
clear
nearest and dearest
summer brush.
art is thrust to capture
the image it must.

[Danik 2016]

Sounds pessimistic cacian, but brings new points of views about love.

[angliholic]

I enjoyed this little gem of yours, especially this line: indifference is cosy till it turns frost.

[tonywalt]

enjoyed this, hard edged

[cacian]

Sounds pessimistic cacian, but brings new points of views about love.

Danik thanks for reading and feedback. :)

[cacian]

I enjoyed this little gem of yours, especially this line: indifference is cosy till it turns frost.

angliholic thank you so much for reading and much enjoyed your feedback. :)

[cacian]

enjoyed this, hard edged

tony thank you for reading it is very much appreciated. :)

[tailor STATELY]

Enjoyed very much :)

"it has room for magic"...
"art is thrust to capture
the image it must."

I wandered from "ghosting" to the sublimity of love in your offering.

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

[cacian]

tailor STATELY many thanks for reading.
I very much enjoyed your feedback. :)