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[Danik 2016]

Tiny poems where a part is repeated at each new verse

Parading

Paracelsus
Parataxis
Paraglider
Paranormal
Paramount (pictures ?)
Parade
Pará.

[NikolaiI]

Damn, dawg. Tough stuff.
Okay I'll give it a try.

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eau d'eau


beautiful tableau
Thoreau's bureau
plateau morceau

5/11/2022

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tailor

[NikolaiI]

Piece de la resistance
Stance of a yogi
She is named Constance.

(Tance)

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ante canto/fantasia


triumphant giant buoyant eggplants pantomime.
chrysanthemum phantoms banter jubilantly -
distantly enchanting verdant plant fantasies

valiant elephants (constantly vigilant) recant
disadvantages; meantime, resonant lanterns
tantalize radiant mantis' antennae ante canto

5/12/2022

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tailor

[Danik 2016]

This thread is flourishing in spite of the title I didn´t know how to correct.

Universe
Metadata
Metaverse.

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finis


infinite
refining
redefining
affinities

5/12/2022

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tailor

[Danik 2016]

Enjoyed!

Antivirus
Antigen
Anticeptic
Antibiotic
Antibody
Nobody

[tailor STATELY]

Love it... Something Emily Dickinson might have written had she lived in these times :)


stigmata


forgive
forgave
verity
parity
parables
paradigm
enigmatic
workingman
King

5/13/2022

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tailor

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jibber jabber
dandelions and candy
anticipate ants' deployments
cloying, frenzying enzymic
microcosmic protocols

5/30/2022

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[Danik 2016]

Synthetic and charming.

A tiny poem
It comprises
the
head
of
a
pin.

[Danik 2016]

*******editing difficulties*****

[tailor STATELY]

Yes, I have noticed some wonkiness in editing... usually duplications if you take the wrong path.

Nice poem :) Lost track of what the rules are, offering this:


Magic Mountainside
Magic
mountainside -
Lupines,
golden poppies,
and clover
Honeycomb attracts
a bear

6/1/2022

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tailor

[Danik 2016]

After new menace of being "banned" managed to edit the poem about. A good word "wonkiness"!:)

Enjoyed your bear poem. No rules at all, the poem has just to be tiny.

Postcard spring

A blue butterfly
suspended among
bright colored flowers.

A fixed smile
on the face
of nature.

[tailor STATELY]

"An unconscious butterfly" (lol)... one would expect a postcard butterfly to be static I guess.

Revisiting soon :)

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tailor

[Danik 2016]

You´re right, it´s incongruous. Made some changes in the poem above

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Love the changes :)


Fog
Dank and wet
Beclouds my senses
I enjoy its obscurity
A misty haze

6/4/2022

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tailor

[Danik 2016]

Interesting poem!

Going global

If here the sun shines
and there it rains
And on the
other side of the planet
snow and ice abound
what is the weather today?

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Enjoyed your question poem :) Global weather today: is droughts/floods/snows/rains/haboobs/hails/sleets/tornadoes/tropical depressions/etc

Revised my latest poem above due to a bit of redundancy:


Fog
Fog…
Its dankness
Beclouds my senses
Though I enjoy its obscurity
A misty haze


6/4/2022 r.6/6/2022

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[Danik 2016]

Thanks. I prefer the first version of "Fog", it seems more intuitive ( less explanatory) to me. If you allow me the boldness of a suggestion:

Fog

Dank and wet
Beclouds my senses
wrapping them
in a misty haze
I enjoy its obscurity

[Danik 2016]

Tentatively

Footprints in the sand,
traces of words
Outlined vultures
fleeting lights
where, oh where
has my memory
gone?

[tailor STATELY]

Quite existential... enjoyed the metaphors. I like your take on Fog.


cherry blossom
bright
a lazy day
a cherry blossom upon
a young lady falls delicately
light

6/7/2022

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[Dark Muse]

Marvelous mounds
majestic mountains
magnificent mesas

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Missed this one Dark Muse... enjoyed :)

malaise and ennui

malaise and ennui
they shackle me
without my dreams

8/13/2022

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