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tonywalt
03-17-2022, 07:34 PM
I am doing nothing
at the pool today
clouds drowsing above

someone is bombing cities
someone is screaming in traffic
someone is stuck in a broken elevator

I scratch my belly and
feel the butter warmth of
the sun on my shoulders

I am without the noise
of any language, and away
from the habit of striving and
the concerns of the herd

I am away from the dotting of i’s
and the crossing of t’s that have
become each

day

after

day

I would ask you to stay still
as if you were absent from yourself
and you hear me from a distance

and now be silent, for a while

just breathe in for 3 seconds

now breathe out for 3 seconds

Keep breathing

and I will do the same

I will now close my eyes, and
lie here with only the sound of
the bees in the grass

and you will stay quiet

and I will do nothing

and you will understand
the treasure of my escape.

tailor STATELY
03-18-2022, 02:40 AM
Thank you for this peace :)

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor STATELY

Danik 2016
03-18-2022, 06:29 AM
Enjoyed it, Tony.
A title occurred to me, but I don´t know whether you'll like it: The song of the alligator.

WolfLarsen
03-18-2022, 09:08 PM
This is very good. One thing that is beautiful is that we are all so very different. I don't think I've ever written a relaxing poem in my life. But this relaxing poem is very good.

tonywalt
03-19-2022, 01:43 PM
Enjoyed it, Tony.
A title occurred to me, but I don´t know whether you'll like it: The song of the alligator.

Yea Danik! That is a great title. i can never think of great titles.

Buh4Bee
03-19-2022, 06:22 PM
That is a great title. Much enjoyed.