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virtuoso
09-16-2021, 04:13 AM
steel girders now abridged charter
scraps of mercantile pride subsumed
'neath the ashes of freedom's altar
veiled limbs dissected, liberated
manifests for future generations
residual smoke from sacristy
purifying canopic shards
frankincense, myrth strained
into flaring nostrils
brailled dreams
into dilated eyes
as a sad siren
echoes unspoken words
rises to a crescendo
exhaling liberty's curse

MANICHAEAN
09-17-2021, 05:19 AM
Imaginative, articulate, full of passion.

Loved it.

Congratulations.

virtuoso
09-17-2021, 07:57 PM
Thanks, thanks, thanks. I feel like Jim Neighbors, but I have to respond to all three descriptions!