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MystyrMystyry
08-27-2021, 11:00 PM
Walking through the park with Frippy

Recalling the past

Mothers wheeling prams

Old men stalemating

Kids slipping down the dippery

Birds sizing up crumbs


Squeaks

Squips

Squeals

Squawks


But now silence

Except for the rain

Wind

Thunder


I pat Frippy's head and watch her diodes light up


And we walk home through the wet leaves and lightning

Danik 2016
08-28-2021, 07:22 AM
That is beautiful and soo fitting!

WolfLarsen
08-28-2021, 01:37 PM
Nice!

tonywalt
09-01-2021, 09:43 AM
really love this. existential, bukowskiesque poem

Jerrybaldy
11-05-2021, 10:21 PM
I really enjoyed it MM but the single word lines are rarely enough no matter how they feel so at the time

tailor STATELY
03-08-2022, 09:36 PM
Hoping Frippy is waterproof.

Another MystyrMystyry mastyrypiece :)

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor