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cacian
12-02-2020, 12:52 PM
I could amuse
myself with threads
of words
they make the world
go heard
birds biblical fly magical
but I chose to prove
myself
conversations
radical
meaningless or hypothetical
transform lives for many
and others
opinions reach out
ideas deep down
the enamel of industrial
panels
turn a rare atom
ideal sudden
happens
the moon rays in crystal
patterns
lullaby in matins.

Danik 2016
12-04-2020, 07:52 AM
"ideas deep down
the enamel of industrial
panels
turn a rare atom
ideal sudden
happens
the moon rays in crystal
patterns
lullaby in matins."
Loved these images, cacian!

cacian
12-04-2020, 11:55 AM
Danik so glad you like those lines and thank you for reading. :)

tailor STATELY
03-09-2022, 06:31 AM
Love this poem ! ... has an Emily Dickinson quality about it.

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

cacian
05-05-2022, 07:02 PM
tailor STATELY many thanks for reading. :)