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cacian
12-01-2020, 09:50 AM
there is nothing
more remarkable
then slim tangible
probing eligible
to walk on a thin line
hopelessly lonesome

to lose all immunities
abrasive

to be left open
to criticisms without
phrases
impossible

and
to cherish all that has
vanished without traces and
feel untarnished
vulnerable

to impact such cases
fearsome
it simply amazes
one manages invincible
with a force
that trespasses
decay and pauses rages

the mind wages
life is made for tasers
and unphases
inevitable
never ending is pages.

defiance
a courtier in faience
not science
may chip but rarely drips
mosaic clips
the air crisps
such talent grips!

Danik 2016
12-01-2020, 04:00 PM
Wow!There are strong sentiments behind that poem, cacian!

cacian
12-02-2020, 04:37 PM
Danik many thank you for reading and feedback. :)

Danik 2016
12-04-2020, 07:49 AM
You are welcome!

tonywalt
12-13-2020, 10:10 AM
Nice one Cacian.