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Hawkman
11-23-2020, 06:12 PM
The House of Agamemnon

In the house of Agamemnon a corpse light burns
as he lies abed and dreams of darkness
and the thrust of flashing bronze,
the clash of spear and shield,
and gurgling cries of men.

In death, he dreams of death,
those he has meted out in petulance,
the regality of law and war -
no justice but his own.
In his mind, he is immortal,
though he felt the blows that laid him out upon his pyre,
he feels them no more.

In the house of Agamemnon
the corpse light dances round his royal frame
reflected in those eyes that stare so blindly at the dark
and flickers merrily upon the coin between his lips.
Clytemnestra looks upon his ruin and sighs,
as her lover sighs, contentedly. Her sister sits
and sews a robe for Menelaus.

In the house of Agamemnon it is always late,
where sons and sisters long for a mother's and a lover's end,
though it was a sister caused a sister's death.
See? The night lights, ever burning, never turning,
when bare footsteps on cold stone, in haste, depart
and run away to sea, to be pursued,
up to the gates, by the command of fate.
Apollo will not intervene.

Wicks untrimmed, the lamps burn smokily,
the yellow flames a-flicker in light night airs,
and the bitter carbon scent of them
taints the sepulchral gloom
in the house of Agamemnon.

Danik 2016
11-24-2020, 08:39 AM
Loved it. Was wondering what contemporaneous House of Agamemnon you might have in mind, when you wrote it.

Hawkman
11-24-2020, 07:25 PM
Hi Danik. Thanks for stopping by to read the poem, and for being so good as to let me know that you enjoyed it. Sadly, I can’t admit to having any contemporary house of Agamemnon in mind when I wrote it. I was firmly anchored in classical antiquity, though the corruption of power and its effect on the limited intellect of greed is a fairly timeless observation, and you will find it if you look in the right places.

Live and be well - H

tailor STATELY
11-25-2020, 03:53 AM
Enjoyed :)

Such a tangled web this tragedy...thank you for revisiting with your deft poem.

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Hawkman
11-25-2020, 06:23 AM
Hi Tailor, and thank you too for reading.

live and be well - H

Jerrybaldy
11-25-2020, 08:53 PM
You are a class act Mr Hawk. Classy and classical.

Jerrybaldy
11-25-2020, 08:55 PM
You are a class act Mr Hawk. Classy and classical.
I like that we are both still around 10 years or more later. Covid hasnt buggered us. Always good to hear from you and read you.

Hawkman
11-26-2020, 04:30 PM
Cheers, JB. And ditto.

Live and be well -H

AuntShecky
11-27-2020, 04:09 PM
Hmmm-- neo-neo-classic maybe? Most interesting structure -- a variation on the sestina form? I hear echoes of Swinburne too (but maybe that's just me.) This is not to say that the piece is derivative.

In any event, given the worldwide malaise and malady, good to see your presence on these webpages. Here's ho[ing you remain relatively happy and psychologically immune from the Zeitgeist and all that.

Hawkman
11-28-2020, 03:06 PM
Hi Auntie, thanks for stopping by. After a hiatus of several years, I was moved to write something. This was the result. It felt good to produce again. Most of my energies are devoted to survival these days. Gets harder to do things every day as fresh bits of me protest against any form of exercise. Such is my punishment for having survived this long... Hope all is well with you too. Nil desperandum, and all that. What America needs is for the left to learn to love the gun! Why should Republicans have all the fun of killing people who disagree with them, or just happen to be in the way? Let’s see the democrats assassinate a president or two. Even the score :D

Live and be well - H