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tonywalt
09-16-2020, 02:50 PM
Me up at dawn
in the silence

feet on floor
I stare
at windowed ocean

a nested bird

nearby

asks me, "What
have you done that

I wouldn't have?"

AuntShecky
09-17-2020, 02:18 PM
This piece sent me to the "Google" machine to look up the poet who only used adding machine paper to keep his lines short. I couldn't remember his name, but it was (and is) A.R. Ammons. In any event the lines here (as well as your earlier posts) reminded me of this award-winning writer's M.O.

tailor STATELY
09-17-2020, 06:04 PM
Enjoyed :)

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

tonywalt
09-17-2020, 08:45 PM
This piece sent me to the "Google" machine to look up the poet who only used adding machine paper to keep his lines short. I couldn't remember his name, but it was (and is) A.R. Ammons. In any event the lines here (as well as your earlier posts) reminded me of this award-winning writer's M.O.

Thanks!

tonywalt
09-17-2020, 08:46 PM
Enjoyed :)

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Thanks!

cacian
09-18-2020, 07:49 AM
tony much enjoyed.
Thanks for posting! :)

Shadowlight
09-20-2020, 12:01 PM
And as I read that last line the confessions come pouring. So much, what of humanity is natural.

tonywalt
09-20-2020, 12:11 PM
And as I read that last line the confessions come pouring. So much, what of humanity is natural.

Yes. Confessional writing is perhaps the best natural reservoir of writing. Hell, all art is self-portraiture, in some form.