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Kyriakos
08-24-2020, 06:18 PM
Hi, this is a brief prose-poem of mine :)

A man looks outside and thinks: “This street is dirty, and how repulsive are the expressions of the passers-by. No sense of unity in their crooked movements and sideways furtive stares; they might as well have been crude antagonism personified”.

To such a man normalcy is already unbearable and so he does not sense that things can get worse. And if, in a flash, the furtive stare would change to raised hand, and the street’s corruption would acquire a crimson tint, it’s a superfluous danger, like a shark approaching one about to drown.

I also narrated it, here:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HssQ64UGdE4

tailor STATELY
08-25-2020, 05:38 AM
Minimalism :) for a prose poem... A+ for presentation.

Enjoyed very much...

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Danik 2016
08-25-2020, 11:00 AM
Short but profound story, very fitting for these pandemic times, when the normal suddenly becomes dangerous. I also loved the presentation and the (Greek?) accent.

Kyriakos
08-25-2020, 07:24 PM
Thank you both!
Yes, I have a very Greek accent ^_^

Shadowlight
09-20-2020, 11:58 AM
Lack of unity and connection, perhaps the strongest predictor of violence. Enjoyed very much. You have a wonderful reading voice. I feel I could listen to poetry like this for hours.