max

[cacian]

the spices of life
are epic
they mechanise
and neutralise
the substances
of air
perfumes of
roses in multiple
poses
idealise the roots
of fertilise
its attracts and distracts
the mind
to an absolute max
all it wants to do is zoom
to nature's full bloom
time only a matter of moons
tunes till
happyness rules.

[Danik 2016]

Loved that: "the spices of life
are epic"

Your poem reminds me of the point of view of a camera.

[tonywalt]

Loved this.

[cacian]

Danik and tony many thanks for reading and the feedback! :)

[tailor STATELY]

Enjoyed :)

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

[cacian]

STATELY many thanks for reading. :)