anxiety

[cacian]

it is a little bit
lonely
when silence homely
solidify
hearing anxious
runs out of functions
and registers tensions
life ventures electrify
sound vibrations rise
and purifies the only way is high
low says bye.

[YRKB]

low says bye.

I particularly like the simplcity of this little sentence, there's something freeing about it.

[tailor STATELY]

With apology I used your poem as a word list and came up with:



anxiety (dis-assembled)


bit anxious -
a homely low
... way it is

of ventures... little

lonely is the only high

when tensions rise and
functions electrify
hearing runs out -
sound vibrations solidify
silence registers

life says:
"bye"

and purifies


Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

[cacian]

I particularly like the simplcity of this little sentence, there's something freeing about it.

YRKB many thanks for reading and the feedback. :)

[cacian]

With apology I used your poem as a word list and came up with:



anxiety (dis-assembled)


bit anxious -
a homely low
... way it is

of ventures... little

lonely is the only high

when tensions rise and
functions electrify
hearing runs out -
sound vibrations solidify
silence registers

life says:
"bye"

and purifies


Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

Hi there tailor and thank you for reading. :)
This is a very interesting version but how do you mean by
word list?

[Danik 2016]

Hi, cacian,

I identified myself perfectly with these verses:

"it is a little bit
lonely
when silence homely
solidify
hearing anxious
runs out of functions
and registers tensions"

Enjoyed also tailor´s version.

[tailor STATELY]

Sorry for the confusion... Found Poetry:
Traditionally, a found poem uses only words from the original source. However, poets have developed many ways to work with found language. Rearranging word order, inserting line breaks and stanzas, and adding new language can be part of the process. Check out these six popular approaches to creating found poems... https://www.thoughtco.com/found-poetry-4157546 In my version I only used your words (35 total) essentially just re-arranging the words you used (and added none), and adding line breaks and punctuation as needed; it makes for a bit of a stilted presentation in spots (which I may revise at some later point). So, it's a found poem of a poem :)

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

[cacian]

Hi, cacian,

I identified myself perfectly with these verses:

"it is a little bit
lonely
when silence homely
solidify
hearing anxious
runs out of functions
and registers tensions"

Enjoyed also tailor´s version.

Danik thank you for reading and the feedback. :)

[cacian]

Sorry for the confusion... Found Poetry: In my version I only used your words (35 total) essentially just re-arranging the words you used (and added none), and adding line breaks and punctuation as needed; it makes for a bit of a stilted presentation in spots (which I may revise at some later point). So, it's a found poem of a poem :)

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

I see. It is an interesting method. Thank you for that. :)