strict

[cacian]

there was passion
in the beginning
and now it has turned
a lesson
love is made out to feel
out of fashion
constant without
a question
has ran out of emotions
it is lost on repercussion.
doubt astonish
it has become a stoic
it thrives under
heroic.

[tailor STATELY]

Enjoyed this little offering.... the title throws me off a little bit though.

This is how I scanned it with line breaks:

"there was passion
in the beginning

and now it has turned

a lesson
love is made out to feel
out of fashion
constant without

a question
has ran out of emotions
it is lost on repercussion.

doubt

astonish

it has become

a stoic
it thrives under
heroic"

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

[tailor STATELY]

.....

[cacian]

Enjoyed this little offering.... the title throws me off a little bit though.

This is how I scanned it with line breaks:

"there was passion
in the beginning

and now it has turned

a lesson
love is made out to feel
out of fashion
constant without

a question
has ran out of emotions
it is lost on repercussion.

doubt

astonish

it has become

a stoic
it thrives under
heroic"

Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor

taitor STATELY many thanks for reading and the feedback. I liked the way you scanned it. :)
Sorry about the title. I could not think of what to put so I just put
strict
instead.

[Danik 2016]

Loved this poem, cacian!

[cacian]

Danik thank you. :)