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cacian
09-27-2019, 05:23 PM
love is meticulous
when it chooses
immaculate
over particulars
perfection is an art
for worst part an
amulet
it eventually runs out of
fabulous
head over heal is
a stimulus
the need to extrapolate accumulus
to encapsulate desire
to all not just the privileged
it is always for hire
is an acquire to urk or pire.
Danik 2016
09-28-2019, 07:41 AM
Hi cacian,
Thanks for the new poem. Not sure about the last verse though:
"is an acquire to urk or pire."
tailor STATELY
09-28-2019, 11:51 PM
An interesting poem to parse: I'm thinking "to be become angered or worse" (pire, Fr.) for the last line as an interpretation, perhaps.
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
cacian
09-30-2019, 01:54 PM
Hi cacian,
Thanks for the new poem. Not sure about the last verse though:
"is an acquire to urk or pire."
Hello there Danik and thank you for reading.
I mispelled:
irk and not urk from irksome
pire means worse
cacian
09-30-2019, 01:55 PM
An interesting poem to parse: I'm thinking "to be become angered or worse" (pire, Fr.) for the last line as an interpretation, perhaps.
Ta ! (short for tarradiddle),
tailor
tailor STATELY thank you for reading and yes it is the correct interpretation. :)
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