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cacian
09-19-2019, 03:16 AM
desire reduces
stress
it is the combination
of interest
happy it cares
and the emotional
inquest
it has countless
imaginations
ready to tackle
depress
the triads of life
the here and now may neglect
to a speck it is everything
time would elect
modern life recreations
reflect
it is worth giving it respect.

Pensive
10-01-2019, 02:55 PM
I like the positive tone of the poem!
Great rhythm as well.

cacian
10-02-2019, 02:44 PM
I like the positive tone of the poem!
Great rhythm as well.

Pensive great to see you around.
Thank you for reading :)