Lazy Brutes

[apstudent]

Due to a recent lack of participation to my posts, I write this poem to all the viewers that just don't feel like posting.

I don't like you
Yes it's true,
I don't like you
All you do is view
You visit every once in a while,
But just view like an illiterate child.
You probably smell bad,
I can tell,
Never were you rad,
Never get out of your shell,
So now I call you,
To participate,
Join the elite few,
And become my posting mate.
If you don't try,
You will never know,
Your stupidity makes me cry,
AND THIS DARN POEM JUST DOESN'T FLOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[nome1486]

Hey, at least two people here think you're cool...and your poem sounds cool, especially if you read it while listening to music from Cake :o

[Ammaria]

Sorry, apstudent, but you set yourself up against spongebob of all people...er sponges. Maybe if you get a catchy theme song or something. D HAHA

[Phoenix_Tears]

i have never been particularly fond of S.B.
i like this line best-

If you don't try,
You will never know

[tear_killer]

I dont like to watch T.V. But i do agree with Phonix_Tears

[apstudent]

Personally, I voted for Sponge Bob. It doesn't hurt so much losing to that guy. You can't possibly like the poem I wrote. I mean seriously. It hurts me to read it. I did not like the fact that the line everyone supposedly likes from the poem happens to be the one I want to change the most. Oh well. Thanks for all those that thought I was cool. I guess I will remain living for at least another week. o

[Phoenix_Tears]

don't you dare talk about living another week. life is precious. i may write about such things as suicide,but that does not mean i embrace it! if you were just kidding that is ok. then never mind, but ya caught me off guard there ap. oh well, f' get it. i am just in an etchyity sketchity mood. haven't been getting enough sleep. i fight freezing showers really do wake you up. and boiling orange blossom tea(the qucker and hotter, the more effect). just a tip. i like that line. the resta the poem was..(well it does not hurt me to read it, i hae heard much worse from myself). it is the kind ya read once, think about it, then it is gone. like ozymandias( i spent two whole weeks in gifted english contemplating, reading and analyzing this shall i dare say " stupid, but well written" poem) it recalled that memoi to my mind. I guess it all really matters whether or not YOU like it.

[tear_killer]

phonix i think she was kidding.................................i think

[Phoenix_Tears]

i was hoping so!
been up all night and last night. just prolly overreacting. sorry. ap is a boi right? i thought so.. by the wayz tear killer, i like your quote. reminds me of something off of CSI (my favourite show).