Zodiac Letter Poem

[Phoenix_Tears]

-This poem was inspired by a letter from the zodiac killer, (68-69)
i particularly like this poem. let me know what ya think-

Sick of living unwilling to die
With nobody do I see eye to eye
And eye for an eye an ear for an ear
I hate the world but it is me that I fear
By fire by rope by gun by knife
Slowly painfully take my life
Mentally beat me call me a freak
Right here right now it is death I seek
Scorn my tears scratch at my eyes I will still see
Slowly drive rusty nails through every inch of me
What do you not understand about my request?
After a// isn’t my pain all for the best?
Whip me
Rip me
You may not want to but you will hear it
Your actions have already drowned my spirit
Why not finish the job
Finish me off
Don’t shake your head and scoff
You can not just leave me be
Common I know it is my spilt blood you want to see
Yes yes yes you hear me taunt
I promise not to come back to haunt
What is a life without a soul
That I fear with no console
Common I am begging you hands and knees
Just finish me off, please!

[Koa]

I like it! It expresses real feelings... and i like that kind of depressed poetry ;)

[lallison]

it's so moving! This is sure to be a classic. I'm happy to have been able to read this before some fancy publishing company gets hold of it. Glad I was here and one of the first. Congratulations

[PrinceMyshkin]

Of course it can only be your guess as to what this monster really felt, but it's a compelling guess indeed.

[Delta40]

its a dark and passionately felt poem. me go eat some chocolate now...