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    The lost world

    The lost world


    Where suffering disappeared,
    This place, I think, is somewhere,
    Where no screams at all heard,
    I long now to go there.

    Where all the people love each other,
    And birds freely fly and sing,
    Where happiness is the people’s mother,
    The ruler isn’t a Lord or a king.

    People there are good and pure,
    All of them are wise and kind,
    No injuries need a cure,
    No injuries there you find.

    The word “War” is not found,
    All the kids are having fun,
    Peace is found all around,
    Always shinning is their sun.

    I decided to go there,
    But it’s found nowhere
    Strive for excellence, not perfection .

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    i really like this one. it reminds of how taking all the good things in life and making them all into one, but yet knowing that utopia could never exist. maybe one day, but definately not today.
    firestarter
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    we hope

    hi firestarter,
    I must thank you for your reply and I am so happy that you like what I have wrote about the lost world .. thank you again and I hope we can find that world some day ..

    yours,
    mirage
    Strive for excellence, not perfection .

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    It is nowhere but in our hearts... Thanks for sharing again mirage.

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    Nice contribution mirage. I believe it is good, well done poem. Frankly, I disagree with you, because I believe that place is exist unless it is Paradise, where shall we all live.
    The more you learn, the more you know.

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