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  1. 02-08-2010, 11:40 PM #1
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    Wildflowers

    Empty Spring spins full
    tearing Winter from its naked use
    Gray to green
    then Riot
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  2. 02-08-2010, 11:44 PM #2
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    You have a real gift for brevity here. I feel the riot is the array of colours that deck the land. Its like a jack-in-the-box burst of joy. very picturesque
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    Quote Originally Posted by hack View Post
    Empty Spring spins full
    tearing Winter from it's naked use
    Gray to green
    then Riot
    and what an irresistible Riot! great! roll on springtime!

    (should not it's rather be its? )
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  4. 02-09-2010, 10:54 PM #4
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    That "Riot" really makes the piece. I also love the poetic brevity.
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