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    A Garden of Love

    I could gather an alphabet of love
    And nurture letters in a garden green
    And watch them form into soft amorous words
    But would they transmute this base metal sun
    To give a treasure more fitting my love?
    But sometimes I do so despair of words
    For they perish so very easily.

    I would gather a garland of love poems
    And watch them rhyme with ease and see them dance
    And you would feel their textures on your skin
    And colours would fall like the softest dew
    They would rainbow your soul and shine on you
    But sometimes I despair of these poemed words
    For they perish so very easily.
    Faith is believing what you know ain't so - Mark Twain

    The preachers deal with men of straw, as they are men of straw themselves - Henry David Thoreau

    The way to see faith is to shut the eye of reason - Benjamin Franklin

    The teaching of the church, theoretically astute, is a lie in practice and a compound of vulgar superstitions and sorcery - Leo Tolstoy

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    lovely but sad. nice
    Nothing but nothingness

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    Thank you, Avalive. Words are impermanent, and this reminds me of how temporal we are. Yet, though transition, decay and change may be sad, endless permanence may be sadder still.
    Faith is believing what you know ain't so - Mark Twain

    The preachers deal with men of straw, as they are men of straw themselves - Henry David Thoreau

    The way to see faith is to shut the eye of reason - Benjamin Franklin

    The teaching of the church, theoretically astute, is a lie in practice and a compound of vulgar superstitions and sorcery - Leo Tolstoy

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    I was thinking, perhaps the essence of the words may change, yet the words stay on. But then I realize there might come a time when some words will vanished permanently, when people are tired with them or when they loose their meanings (for the sake of efficiency).

    Nice poem AP

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