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    A comfortable Passion

    A twirl of my fingers sending rivets in the air
    Disrupts the delicate balance of instability
    With the suppleness of a sordid cat
    A playful contradiction of your own terms
    A misunderstood agreement of empathy
    That guides a heart into the unshallow valley’s den
    A rock with embezzled predisposal
    To be something that is faintly accepted
    Your attractive expression seducing
    Even the most stubborn of deities
    A sullen beat of exasperation
    Because with you everything is an entraption
    And you can captivate the wildest hostile
    With only a glance and a touch of excellence
    And thus we feel deprived of everything
    And a feeling of complete pettiness
    Of extreme satisfaction and comprehensive understanding
    Overwhelms me,
    With a comfortable passion.

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    Hello, Chava. I read this poem for the second time, and found it all the more enjoyable than when you first posted it. Just out of curiosity, who wrote this work?

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