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  1. 08-15-2008, 11:14 PM #1
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    The Feel of You, Taste of You, Scent of You

    The Feel of You, Taste of You, Scent of You

    Close to you
    I feel your breath
    warm; tantalizing

    The scent of you
    lingers in the air
    the touch of you
    a caress in the darkness

    Your fingers lead me through
    trusted wholly to you
    flesh upon flesh
    set aquiver and afire

    The taste of you
    upon my lips; my tongue
    skin upon skin
    you find all the right places

    Falling into you
    your thighs
    hold me still
    your heat radiates

    Thrills ripple through my body
    you know just where to kiss
    each stroke
    of tongue and fingers
    awakening

    My love, my lust
    set me free
    in the ways of love

    Your body instructing mine
    naked in sin
    naked in innocence

    Limbs wrapped up in each other
    hushed words, whispered names
    rhythm of two bodies
    friction; heat; sweat
    body to body
    yours and mine.

    Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before. ~ Edgar Allan Poe
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  2. 08-16-2008, 06:39 AM #2
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    A good example of how poetry permits the private to become public!
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  3. 08-16-2008, 02:20 PM #3
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    The poem could be used to raise temperatures everywhere...Talk about global warming!!!

    Love making as the less fortunate imagine it to be...

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  4. 08-16-2008, 06:36 PM #4
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    LOL, thank you

    Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before. ~ Edgar Allan Poe
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  5. 08-17-2008, 03:07 AM #5
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    Good God, I broke out into a sweat just reading it! It's quite beautiful and evocative, Dark Muse!
    "The important thing is not to stop questioning. Curiosity has its' own reason for existing." ~ Albert Einstein
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  6. 08-17-2008, 03:25 AM #6
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    Hahaha, thank you very much

    Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before. ~ Edgar Allan Poe
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  7. 08-17-2008, 03:32 AM #7
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    Dark Muse, Wow, I think you have been reading too many D.H.Lawrence stories. ....But seriously, I did like it; the poem has great flow...I must admit I didn't expect this explicit a poem from you but it is very well expressed and I enjoyed reading it.
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  8. 08-17-2008, 03:35 AM #8
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    Yes I debated about posting it here, but I was really happy about how it came out, so I decided to go for it.

    Deep into that darkness peering, long I stood there, wondering, fearing, doubting, dreaming dreams no mortal ever dared to dream before. ~ Edgar Allan Poe
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